Film moves on paper. It may be read on a laptop, but someone has to put the words on the page. Not every student who signs up for film school wants to be a writer, but every creative key in the filmmaking chain needs to know the fundamentals of storytelling and the different styles of contemporary screenwriting.
Screenwriting is hard. It’s one of the most challenging literary forms because it’s not what it’s supposed to be. It’s a written document that tells a story – but it’s supposed to become something else. The pages of a script are intended to be interpreted by a creative team – and then transformed into images on a screen. How that transformation turns out is anybody’s guess.
Average screenplays rarely become great films. It can happen, but the smart money starts with quality writing. If you start with good writing, the chances of making a good film are vastly improved.
I took a screenwriting class at the University of British Columbia around the same time I got this Columbia U bootleg lecture transcript. I had a great teacher, Bill Gough, who mentored me through the writing of my first feature film. I felt very fortunate to have his ongoing feedback and advice. Writing is about listening.
Scriptwriting, if it were taught only in the writing classes, would just be writing, but it’s more. It’s filmmaking on paper. Only when the other elements, the proper use of the language of the medium, are included does it begin to really work. That again is the reason why, in the first year, you are asked to take the directing workshop, even when you don’t have any intentions of becoming a director. You must try, at least once, to see what a director can do, what it means to devise an interpretation, to see what the camera and the editing can do for you. Then, even if you never continue directing, it will stay with you.
The problem with many Hollywood writers nowadays is that although they are very often good writers, they have been working, since the studio system disappeared, as total loners. They write in their offices and homes and they don’t feel the contact that, in the old days, the studio days, a writer necessarily did. He was forced to come every day at nine, sit in his cubicle, and type or do whatever. The writers usually played cards and had fun, but they were on the premises of the studio. They had a chance to see what happens when a picture was shot. They were constantly meeting the other professionals, they could ask questions, and they could collect and pick up all the know-how. That’s what we are trying to supply in our program.
We hope that having professionals as teachers will give you the basic idea of what it means to be a scriptwriter. Once you are on the right track and moving forward, you will realize that you will be learning all your life. There’s no end to it. The moment a writer or a director thinks he knows it all he should stop working, because from that moment he will only repeat himself. So if you learn the basics while you’re here, it will be easy to see all the ramifications later. The other classes and the other parts of the program, history, theory, etc., just add to your broader vision of your profession.
As you know, most of you come to the school with very little education in the history of cinema. For most film students all over the world, cinema means what’s being shown in the movie theatres now, today, and things that were made before are seen as prehistory or archeology, something that nobody needs to know about. Then everyone is surprised when a genre that had existed for at least fifty of sixty years reappears and is revived. Everyone looks at it as if it were a brand new phenomenon, a miracle. However, if you are familiar with the history of cinema you will be aware of the other forms, other genres, other types of narrative structures and styles that filmmakers have explored in the past. And that can help you explore different ideas with a new understanding of your own writing.
Now, let me try to explain what the reasons behind the design of the curriculum at Columbia were. It took several years to put the program into shape. Both Milos Forman and I are firm believers in the validity of a solid curriculum. Curriculum for us means a step-by-step outline of the tasks and the problems that the student should go through and solve. That means that if the curriculum, in this sense, is clearly designed any professional who comes in to teach can start functioning. He doesn’t need to invent anything. He just follows the outline and uses his professional expertise to help the students. It make me feel happy that we have achieved it, and that I am leaving the school with a sound curriculum in existence, functioning and working.
Now let’s go back to the two parts of screenwriting: the writing and the dramaturgy. In the writing process the main educational problems are usually connected with the fear that everybody brings in the writing classes. Most of the beginning students don’t believe they have anything to say, and they feel like the director in Fellini’s “8 1/2.” Consequently they try to borrow from other people, and when they begin to write treatments, you can immediately tell who is scared to death, and thinks of avoiding the inevitable and who is trying to collect the courage to jump into the cold water and try something really new, original and personal.
Those who come with a genre story are usually trying to protect themselves, believing that the genre formula will help them put together some acceptable plot and that they will be in an area that’s foolproof. Which means that they start “plotting.” The only things they are concerned with are; where does my first act end and, what’s the culmination of the middle of the second act, etc. etc. They concentrate on all these purely technical and cerebral questions which don’t help the imagination at all. And what they usually end up with is something quite empty. They aren’t in their story, and they are not in the chosen genres. What they end up with are cliches, empty plots, flat characters and dull dialogue.
There is a belief that if you write a genre story, a thriller, a mystery story, etc., you are working on something that is commercial. This consideration, what’s commercial and what isn’t, is something you better forget about completely. All the marketing specialists, and I have a chance to see them every summer when they come to Sundance, are masters at telling you what was successful last year. They believe it will be successful next year, again, but it never works. If you look at those Columbia graduates whose scripts were acquired by the producers or made into film, you’ll see that they succeeded because they came with something that was original, that was not like anything that was made recently.
“After Hours” was not a commercial idea. When Lois Bonfiglio heard – she was then with the Ladd Company and was here when Joe Minion wrote the script – that Martin Scorsese was making the picture she was quite unhappy that she had passed on it. From that moment everybody started reading all the scripts the students were working on because maybe, now and then, something different might come along.
How many times have I seen people try to figure out what would be successful in two years with very little luck. And yet it takes two years to develop and finish a script, if you are fortunate enough to make it into a film. Can you imagine what the world will look like in two years? What will the trends in society be? What need will people feel? Nobody can predict that, and if you start taking the audience into consideration in this way, making assumptions about their future tastes and desire, you are in a field which is only based upon guesses, and usually wrong guesses, and unwillingly you create a sort of censorship for yourself.
The only thing you really need when you write is a total feeling of freedom. That’s why questions like; is this too expensive or, should I make it smaller so that maybe some independent producer will like it, should be forgotten. To make a film less expensive is something that you can do when the first draft is finished. There are always ways of finding the easier and less expensive solutions for scenes and sequences, or the whole scope of the picture.
There is a big difference between a cheap movie and a low budget movie. A low budget movie is a picture that’s designed to cost a certain amount of money that is not overwhelmingly high. A cheap movie is “Ben Hur” made with two horses and a few extras. Again, this idea of what’s expensive should not be on your mind at the time you are writing the script. It’s another form of censorship, and you don’t need that.
The most difficult thing, especially in the beginning years, is to trust yourself and to discover that you’ve got stories to tell, and a lot of stories at that. That realization usually comes as a surprise for most of the students at the moment when they begin to deal with only material that’s theirs and that nobody else can take, i.e. when they start utilizing their own experiences — when they begin to see that everybody they meet and talk to is a possible story or at least a character for a story.
You can sit on an airplane and next to you sits a lady or man, and if you encourage them, if you help them a little bit, and show that you are willing to listen, you get a story immediately. You can do that every day when you meet people. You should learn to listen and create this absolutely genuine interest in people around you, because that is the material that you write about.
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